Feedback - Teacher Rebecca Ives

This is the feedback I received from my teacher, Rebecca Ives. There are re-occurring comments from my peer feedback like a good layout and that I need to consider the colour scheme. This I will take into consideration when constructing my contents page and double page spread and I feel this will help me on my way to creating a much more professional looking magazine. 

Peer Feedback Comments

I feel that the comments that I have recieved have been very useful and I feel they will help me when creating covers in the future and for my contents page and double page spread. I should ensure that there are no areas on the cover that seem empty as a re-occuring comment was the right hand side of my cover looked empty. Furthermore, I need to ensure that the colours that I include do not look too bright also. 

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Ellie Broughton

The work you have done is fantastic and I can tell you have worked really hard and have a lot of extra work which is excellent. On your front page I like the colour scheme and the way your model is wearing a mask and how it has been edited is really cool. The only improvements I could suggest would be adding coverlines to the right hands side of your magazine.

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Becky Marrow

The work you've done so far is up to a good standard and I can see the process before you completed your first draft really well, I also think the way you have commented on some of your drafts shows you've worked hard.

Your final draft is eye-catching and the colours match each other, the bands you've mentioned on your cover lines and your main artists also fit the music genre of your magazine. Overall it looks very conventional and professional.

To improve I would feature more cover lines down the right hand side of your cover as it seems a little empty

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I think your blog is looking good so far, I think the work you have done is at a good standard. I think all 3 of your drafts are very different, and the colours you have used work well together. The image you have used is interesting and the different ways you've edited it make the image look totally different. I think your font stands out and is easy to read from a distance. Think your plan on your progress has loads of information, and you've explained each step you have done well. You have explained your sources and the reasoning on why you've changed the things you have. I don't think many things have to be changed or anything more should be done.

Emma Barker

Peer Feedback by Amelia R

The blog looks good because it has met all of the requrements that were set. Also the colour scheme matches the colours of the front cover mock ups which is cool.

I think that the front cover is great because the coulours are attractive and eyecatching and it looks life a professional magazine.

I think it could be improved by changing the colour the bar at the bottom because it looks a little too bright.