I changed the colour of the message from the editor and the box around it to the same as the contents list and also changed the colour of the subscription box against the colours to make it stand out. Finally, I decided to use the two images of Luke behind each other to represent him as an individualistic artist to fit with the genre of my magazine.
This looks like a great contents, it looks like it could be seen in the shop as it sticks by many conventions, overall a great contents, i would consider moving the title into the top left of the page. Dominic Jackson
ReplyDeleteYour contents page is overall very good, I like the layout and the content included within the articles. The only thing I would change is to make sure the text fits within the articles fully and maybe add something around where the picture is.
ReplyDeleteLuke Bolton.